Microfiction Monday

“I told you they’d never show up, it’s way too foggy”
said Raymond, “I’m going home”
Those were his very last words
Marc wished he’d answered
something back, anything!

-140 characters-

I saw this photograph on m, heart’s blog  so I decided to participate in Microfiction Mondays and step out of my comfort zone
Coming along?


  1. Tracy 🙂 I guess this photograph is very dramatic hence those somber words and somehow, I'm still debating what happened to him ;-)sylvia, Thank you very much…If I told you I do not know myself what happened to Raymond, it would not sound so good right? but honestly I'm on the fence…about his whereabouts…Se'Lah! I'm glad you like it 🙂


  2. Very good microfiction! What happened to Raymond? I want to know, so that I can have closure!Welcome to this fun weekly exercise…looking forward to reading more of your posts.


  3. Oh, that is GOOD, Anyes… very dramatic words to go with a dramatic picture! I hope those weren't their last words. ;o) Happy Day, my friend ((HUGS))


  4. Susan, It's my first time and I really enjoyed it :-)Elizabeth, I don't know if he died or if it was the last time they spoke together 😉


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