140 characters and a picture tell a story
here is mine
here is mine
Oh Marguerite, how I wish you’d given me a chance
and felt my tender embrace.
Seen my love for you had no end,
alas you’re still with him!
140 characters
Join us for the Microfiction Mondays with Susan Carleton at Stony River
Far Away In The Sunshine 
Oh woe is me!
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Alas and alack, indeed!Have a great week.
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Perhaps this is unrequited love. Or is it the ramblings of a potential stalker? This story could continue in a few different directions. Nice job.
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Such a pleasure to read your comments Thank you so much to everyone 🙂
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I'll bet her current "love" didn't even give her a valentine. Phffft.
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Unrequited love is so sad! I do hope he won't pine forever. Well done!
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aww poor guy!
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I felt sorry for our guy by himself, but now I feel even sorrier! Good one.
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I hope he manages to find love one day soon…and THEN she'll be sorry!
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Love this Monday's microfiction. How appropriate for V-day!
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Diane is right, a lot of emotion in such a few words! Terrific! Have a great week!Sylvia
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So much emotion felt in those few words. Great job! :O)
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Poor guy, trying to make someone love you, is tough!Nice take on this MF.
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Alas indeed! perfect for the picture :o)
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Aw, sadness creeping into the love story!Well done.
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